Red King & Hound of the Son of the Sea, will Edit your Work
Ror Mc Redacts
Work
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roofreading
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opyediting & Editing
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cript/ Screenplay Critique & Feedback
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Proofreading
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hether you have just finished your draft for a
courtroom drama set in the middle palaeolithic age, or an owner manual for the upcoming 2025 model, I can help you.
I can find the grammatical errors that may have eluded you & rectify them. I will also fact check everything written to ensure it is as accurate as possible. So if you have spelt it ‘colour’ despite the audience being American, or have written a scene with a Tudor using an oven, I will ensure these issues are fixed.
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Copyediting & Editing
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ometimes proofreading may not be quite enough.
ot quite the editing you’re looking for? No
That’s okay, I can restructure your text, formatting, provide creative suggestions & help find your distinct quality & voice. Ideal if you are trying to hit a large demographic with your article, advertising, or land that gut punch with your story.
I have copyedited for tour companies, puppet shows, writers & even table top board games.
problem, I can also edit your website, graphics & animations with a variety of software including:
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Script/ Screenplay Critique & Feedback
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ive in London? Let’s meet in person! It can be a
f you have finished a draft of your project &
daunting experience, sending your ‘baby’ off to be critiqued by strangers. It can also be lonely; you get this list of issues to work on, but you never have the chance to properly explain what you are trying to achieve. I know the feeling!
Meeting in person allows you to spit ball ideas to someone who has just gone through your work. It leaves you full of confidence &, most importantly, eager to dive into your next draft.
We can meet at a place that you are familiar with, or somewhere new - entirely up to you. This is about you & your project.
are looking for someone to provide professional feedback, I can help. I have helped artists on multiple works, including poems, pilots, plays & features.
This service includes proofreading & copyediting, but goes further into the specialism of story. If you want someone to analyse your pace, act structure, character arcs, themes or trochaic tetrameter - you’re in the right place! If all that sounded like Latin, then perhaps my other services may be more useful to you at this time.
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Writing
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n an (albeit, potentially vain) effort to put my money
where my mouth is, I like to write too! My main focus is screenplays for features but I have also written shorts, social media ads & a play. I’m currently working on a pilot & researching for a book.
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croll down if you want see some of my stuff. Please click on the images if you like the look of them!
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retty Lil’ Thing is a feature script I’ve written. It’s an action script.
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rabs is a drama/ comedy I’ve written for the stage.
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ombi is a short comedy I’ve written that an up & coming director has taken interest in.
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eppuku is a novella I wrote that came 3rd in a writing competition.
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o you like any of the decks? Would you like me to design something similar for you? Get in touch! An effective deck is a great way to get a producer or director interested in your script or creative idea. They are usually very
busy & may not have time to commit to reading your whole draft. If the deck excites them - they will more than likely read your draft. All of the above decks convinced either a producer or director to read the script.
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Contact
rory@rormcredacts.com
07493390111
www.linkedin.com/in/rory-mcnamara-02477b137
